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Published Course
Design
Course Description
Institutional Context
Theoretical Rationale
Critical Reflection
Works Cited
Syllabus
Course Description
English
496: Senior Seminar in Writing
Professor Elizabeth Ervin
University of North Carolina at Wilmington
English 496: Senior Seminar in Writing,
is designed as the "capstone experience" for English majors
in the Professional and Creative Writing option at the University
of North Carolina at Wilmington, a rapidly-growing public comprehensive
university with a combined population of approximately 10,000
graduate and undergraduate students. The course also
fulfills seminar requirements for English majors in General
and Teacher Licensure options and satisfies the University's "oral
communication competency" requirement. It is described
in the undergraduate catalog as a "[w]orkshop leading to production
of a senior manuscript in prose or poetry and public reading
of selected work."
Institutional
Context
In addition to the intellectual influences I've described,
my design of Writing for Diverse Publics was affected by
two sets of local circumstances. The
first was my frustration with the virtual absence of political involvement and
civic-mindedness at my university. Only 775 out of approximately 9000 undergraduate
students voted in the 1997 Student Government Association presidential elections,
for example (Shaw 1A), and the recent local elections attracted a measly 8% of
registered voters from the campus precinct, and only 22% to 23% in the more residential
neighborhoods immediately surrounding campus, where many students live ("Election" 2B). These
patterns may not be unique to my institution and community, but they are nonetheless
troubling in a society that depends on civic participation for coherent political
debate and sound public policy. As Curtis Gans wrote in a post-election
op-ed essay, "Because voting is a lowest-common denominator political act--that
is, people who don't vote tend not to participate in any other societally useful
activities--decline means both diminution of social capital and a polity dominated
by the self-interested and the zealous" (5E). Unfortunately, "societally
useful activities" are considered extracurricular by many students and academics--even
those whose pedagogies theoretically depend on engagement with the world outside
the classroom. I was determined that WDP present such activities as a norm
of behavior, and writing as one way of practicing them.
The second concern to which my course responded
was the prevailing view within my department that "writing" refers
either to "creative" (i.e., nonacademic) writing or literary
analysis. This perspective is partly a result of traditional
institutional attitudes that literary production and study
are the primary businesses of an English department, but
it can be traced as well to the recent launching of a Master
of Fine Arts in creative writing at my institution--the only
terminal degree the university offers, as my colleagues and
I are repeatedly reminded. Due to the happy coincidence
of a charismatic program director, supportive administrators,
and a generous local patron, the MFA and the undergraduate
Professional and Creative Writing (PCW) option in English
have thrived--to the detriment, some believe, of other programs
in the English Department, including other kinds of writing. Rhetoricians
and compositionists, for example, are not considered "writing
faculty," and are not members of the departmental PCW committee.
To accommodate the growing number of PCW majors,
two years ago the English department developed English 496,
a senior seminar in writing that has functioned almost exclusively
as a workshop in poetry, fiction, and creative nonfiction. (Before
that, we offered the all-purpose English 495: Senior
Seminar in English, which has since become Senior Seminar
in Literature/Language, designed for English majors in the
Language and Literature, General, and Teacher Licensure options.) The
relatively small number of PCW students who are interested
in technical, professional, or, for lack of a more precise
term, "civic" writing, or who wish to undertake advanced
study of teaching writing, are not well served by this focus. Although
such courses count toward graduation requirements for PCW
students, they are widely perceived as either too academic
or not academic enough--in short, vaguely inappropriate for
budding (creative) "writers"--and thus are seldom offered
and often underenrolled. The catalog description of
English 496 further reflects this bias: "Workshop leading
to production of a senior manuscript in prose or poetry and
public reading of selected work." Other conceptions
of writing--for example, the possibility that discourse might
be "made public" through means other than an oral reading--go
unnamed, and probably unimagined.
These features of my local situation are, I
think, related. Simply put: many of the faculty
in my department possess a limited view of writing and practice
writing in limited ways, and, subtly or directly, convey
this perspective to students. Consequently, even though
Writing for Diverse Publics was designed specifically for
those English majors whose personal or professional interests
were not otherwise satisfied by advanced workshops in a creative
genre, these students' inexperience with public discourse,
combined with a tacit skepticism about its value to their
lives, complicated our work together all semester.
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Theoretical
Rationale
WRITING FOR DIVERSE PUBLICS
CRITICAL STATEMENT
Elizabeth Ervin
University of North Carolina at Wilmington
In the past few years, composition instructors
have expressed their increasing dissatisfaction with teaching
writing in ways that objectify "society" rather than foster
students' direct interaction with it, or that require students
to produce texts that have no real exigency beyond getting
a grade. I'm one of those instructors, and Writing
for Diverse Publics (WDP) is one in a series of pedagogical
experiments that I have designed as a means of developing
alternative purposes and discourses for school-based writing.
Elsewhere I have suggested that textbooks and
assignments that ask students to investigate and write about
social issues might promote "latent inclinations toward civic
engagement," but they do not necessarily eventuate civic
behaviors outside of the classroom (Ervin 392). Teachers
who wish to foster such behaviors, I argued, must make more
explicit the connections between classroom and public--not
only by creating opportunities for students to use writing
for authentic public purposes, but by "actively accompany[ing]" them
in these efforts (389). Susan Wells agrees, adding
that we do justice neither to the complex history of public
discourse nor to its possibilities for effecting social change
when we assign students "generic public writing" that asks
them to "inscribe their positions in a vacuum":
[S]ince there is no place within the culture
where student writing on [for example] gun control is held
to be of general interest, no matter how persuasive the
student, or how intimate their acquaintance with guns, "public
writing" in such a context means "writing for no audience
at all." It is not some deficit on the part of students
that makes such writing impossible. (328)
Indeed. But neither is it some deficit
on our part that makes it difficult for "real" public writing
to conform to the particular circumstances and requirements
of school: its need to measure and evaluate, its artificial
time constraints, its standardizing impulses. These,
rather, are conditions we must work around, work against;
and they make teaching and learning public writing a difficult,
unfamiliar, and often inconvenient enterprise.
All of which makes it a good idea to examine
some of the related trends in rhetoric and composition scholarship
and pedagogy that manifest the kinds of concerns I've identified,
and that influenced the design of Writing for Diverse Publics;
these include service learning, community literacy, and public
intellectualism. With their attention to nonacademic
contexts for writing, these trends can also be seen as a
response to growing demands for universities to place more
emphasis on workplace and civic readiness skills--demands
that result not only from changes in the economy, but also
the persistent perception that academics must be more accountable
to community needs (see, e.g., Fairweather).
Service learning is perhaps the most prominent
of these trends--so much so that it can legitimately be called
a "movement," or even, in the language of some proponents,
a "microrevolution" (Adler-Kassner, Crooks, and Watters 1). Although
it takes myriad forms, service learning-oriented composition
courses typically ask students to engage in structured community
service activities (e.g., literacy tutoring) and then to
reflect on and write about their experiences. According
to Linda Adler-Kassner, Robert Crooks, and Ann Watters, editors
of a recent book on the subject, faculty and students who
have participated in service learning projects "report radical
transformations of their experiences and understanding of
education and its relation to communities outside campus" (1). Acknowledging
that connections between community service and the teaching
of writing are "by no means obvious" (309), Bruce Herzberg
eventually arrives at the following rationale:
The effort to reach into the composition
class with a curriculum aimed at democracy and social justice
is an attempt to make schools function . . . as radically
democratic institutions, with the goal of making individual
students more successful, but also of making better citizens,
citizens in the strongest sense of those who take responsibility
for communal welfare. These efforts belong in the
composition class because of the rhetorical as well as
the practical nature of citizenship and social transformation. (317)
To guide composition teachers in their efforts
to enact the kind of transformative rhetorical praxis that
Herzberg envisions, Ann Watters and Marjorie Ford offer two
companion textbooks: Writing for Change (an anthology
of readings) and A Guide for Change (an introductory handbook). These
texts are especially useful for teachers like me who do not
enjoy the support of an established service learning office
or program at their institutions; they offer references as
well as many practical suggestions for individual and collaborative
service-oriented writing projects.
Having now coordinated several service learning
projects, I remain deeply committed to that movement's objectives,
but deeply ambivalent about how to achieve them--which is
why I chose not to make WDP a service learning course. Such
courses require an enormous amount of advanced (and ongoing)
planning, and thus do not easily accommodate the more urgent,
spontaneous efforts that might be inspired by, for example,
reading the local newspaper every day. Moreover, some
students feel coerced by service learning projects, especially
if they require extensive collaboration (e.g., the infamous "class
project"; see Sosnoski and Downing) or deal with issues to
which the teacher, not the students, is strongly committed. In
WDP, I was determined that students learn to use their own
interests as a basis for discovering and defining their own
purposes for public writing. I anticipated that most
of them would initially lack confidence and experience (which
was in fact the case), but wanted to provide them with the
opportunity and responsibility to do it anyway. If
this moved them in the direction of community service, great,
but I had no intention of making that decision for them.
Several scholars have identified another potential
problem with service learning that I wanted to avoid in WDP: what
Ellen Cushman calls its "here-I-am-to-save-the-day" propensities
(20). Wayne Campbell Peck, Linda Flower, and Lorraine
Higgins, for example, warn that university/community collaborations
cannot be successful if they remain rooted in the agenda
of the university, and offer an alternative model--community
literacy--in which such collaborations enact strategic, intercultural
conversations and shared inquiry. In a separate essay,
Flower describes a specific practice called a "community
problem-solving dialogue" (CPSD), which "bring[s] together
students, faculty, community leaders, and everyday people,
as well as the written knowledge of the academy and oral
wisdom of the neighborhood," for this very purpose (105). Although
it emerged out of mentoring relationships at a community
literacy center, Flower says that the principles of the CPSD--"telling
the story behind the story, rival hypothesis thinking, and
examining options and outcomes" (110)--can be translated
into "ordinary" writing courses as well. This is a
significant point, since many of us, whether because of limited
resources or personal preference, do not emphasize service
learning or community literacy per se but rather teach academic
writing that is informed by our commitments to public discourse
and activism.
Aaron Schutz and Anne Ruggles Gere call this
approach "'public' service learning," a term they illustrate
by describing a course in which students grouped themselves
according to issues of mutual concern, and then "[wrote]
a paper together about the topic arguing for a specific change
and addressing the audience they had chosen" (136); groups
were encouraged to submit their projects to the intended
audiences, although only one of five actually did. This
course (or at least this assignment) corresponds in many
respects to what I had in mind for WDP. However, while
Schutz and Gere see it as an example of the classroom as
a public space, I see it as an extension of our profession's
revived interest in public intellectualism. Typically,
these discussions have taken the form of exhortations that
faculty do a little less analyzing of public discourse and
a little more "doing" of it, and asserts, in the words of
Edward Schiappa, that "We should not allow ourselves the
easy out of believing that being 'political' in the classroom
is a substitute for our direct civic participation" (22). Schiappa
and others, like Cushman, tend to equate civic participation
(including public discourse) with activism--which, according
to Cushman, "begins with a commitment to breaking down the
sociological barriers between universities and communities" (12)
and involves an abiding commitment to "expand the scope of
our scholarly activities" (16). By embracing a vision
of public space that is more comprehensive--both practically
and theoretically--than the classroom, courses like WDP invite
students to engage in this process as well. "Leading
by example" must be a central tenet of this vision, for teachers
can and, I think, should model public intellectualism, if
not as high-profile activists, then at least as informed
citizens, people who pay attention to and take responsibility
for what's going on in their communities.
Thus situated, Writing for Diverse Publics
took shape in my mind as a workshop in which students and
I would read, talk, inquire, and write together as a means
of advancing publicly our individual and collective agendas. In
my fantasies, our classroom was a beehive of political activity
where people were engaged in writing that really mattered
(something like The War Room, that documentary about Clinton's
first presidential campaign, with English majors instead
of James Carville and George Stephanopolis), and my stated
goals were only slightly more modest: I wanted to establish
a supportive environment in which public discourse was undertaken
in a disciplined and enthusiastic way by all members of the
class; in which course activities were determined primarily
(if not solely) by students' interests and choices; and in
which students began to see the world as a kaleidoscope of
rhetorical situations and themselves as its agents. In
articulating these goals and expectations, I assumed that
students did indeed have interests and convictions but needed
the explicit instruction and encouragement that might assist
them in constructing meaningful writing projects. I
hoped that by the end of the semester, they might consider
careers in public information and nonprofits, as well as
feel more deeply committed to, and capable of intervening
in, the issues that concerned them.
Critical
Reflection
Over the first few weeks of the semester, I found out a few things about
the students who enrolled in Writing for Diverse Publics. Most were PCW
majors who were interested in technical or professional writing or journalism
and chose this as the most fitting seminar available; some couldn't get into
the creative writing workshops they wanted and ended up in my course by default;
a few simply wanted to try a different kind of writing. Many of these students
had been fed a steady diet of "writer as romantic figure" throughout their education
and resisted (sometimes resented) my efforts to disabuse them of the notion that
the principal purpose of writing is self-expression. Six of the fourteen
students planned to graduate at the end of the semester, but only one of these
expressed any desire to pursue work as a professional writer. Most seemed
excited about the prospect of reading the newspaper every day, and many already
did so. Thirteen of the students were female. Although all of my
students readily compiled a list of interests or commitments that could guide
their writing (they were pretty liberal, as UNCW students go), none of them had
ever engaged in anything that might be considered public writing prior to our
class; many, however, had considered doing so (mentally composing letters to
the editor was a particularly common example), and some had actually come close
(e.g., had written the letter but stopped short of sending it). They attributed
their reticence primarily to fear: of being exposed as ignorant, of being
disagreed with, of calling attention to themselves. Some admitted to a
certain laziness: they had opinions but preferred leaving the "arguments" to
someone else.
On the whole, the circumstances seemed cause
for reserved optimism; students appeared to have the "latent
inclinations," if not yet sufficient confidence, to go public
with their writing. As a gesture of solidarity, I revealed
a little about my own experience as a late bloomer to public
writing: how I've always been an obsessive reader of
the local newspaper but for most of my life followed stories
from the comfort of my living room; how at the age of 30
I decided I no longer wanted to be a passive spectator and
wrote my first letter to the editor; how this experience
so liberated me that I actually live in the world differently
now, with the assumption that I will participate in my community's
ongoing public conversations, whether through writing or
other actions. I told them how looking at the face
of the "Pet of the Week" in the newspaper every Wednesday
morning is not only a singular act of courage for me but
also a weekly admonition to put my money where my mouth is,
that is, to take more responsibility for my convictions. I
was never taught how to do this, I said, and was never encouraged
to do it, either--maybe because of archaic taboos against
women speaking out in public, maybe because civic behaviors
are considered so basic as to be self-evident, maybe because
they just don't seem to fall within the purview of school. My
experience is all too familiar, I concluded; public discourse
is something of a mystery to most of us, which is why a course
like Writing for Diverse Publics is so important.
My little oration was intended to reassure
students that it's possible to engage in meaningful public
discourse even if you've never considered yourself "that
kind of person." And for a while, it did seem to have
this effect. Several students scornfully reported being
required to write fake letters to newspaper editors or corporate
presidents, even going so far as to address the envelopes
and "send" them to their teachers. Everyone recognized--and
condemned--the hollowness of such assignments, and we resolved
informally not to waste our time on them. Guided by
Wells' article, which we had just read for class, we discussed
the incongruities inherent in engaging in public writing
within a school setting, but collectively agreed to put forth
the effort necessary to circumvent these problems.
Not only did students seem to identify with
my pedagogical goals, but many of them also shared an interest
in animal rights, which united the class philosophically
and also came in handy when I needed to illustrate unfamiliar
concepts. Early in the semester, for example, there
emerged an ideal occasion to define and apply two key terms,
rhetorical situation and public discursive intervention,
with which students were struggling. Ashley--a volunteer
for a local group called Cat Adoption Team--had led a discussion
of an article from the newspaper that dealt with the problem
of "Dalmatian dumping": people buying the dogs after
seeing the movie 101 Dalmatians and then taking them to animal
shelters when they grew too large or too unmanageable. Students
were shocked by the article and eager to talk about it. We
had already read Lloyd Bitzer's classic essay, in which he
defines rhetorical situation as "a complex of persons, events,
objects, and relations presenting an actual or potential
exigence which can be completely or partially removed if
discourse, introduced into the situation, can so constrain
human decision or action as to bring about the significance
of the exigence" (6). Everyone considered Dalmation
dumping an exigent rhetorical situation, so I suggested that
we brainstorm a list of possible public discursive interventions
that might respond to it; these interventions, I explained,
were the "discourse[s] introduced into the situation" in
order to persuade the target audience to take a desired action. Our
list included a public service announcement to run at the
beginning of the video, a letter to Disney complaining about
the problem, proposed incentives for more responsible breeding
of "designer pets," flyers promoting a Dalmatian rescue league
in our area, and protesting outside theatres where the movie
was playing. Some of these (e.g., the protest) were
rejected because they were physical rather than discursive
interventions; others were revised so that their purpose
was to create an action rather than express an opinion (e.g.,
the letter of complaint directed at Disney became a letter
requesting that Disney make a donation to humane associations). When
we had finished making adjustments to our list, I asked each
student to choose one intervention idea and briefly analyze
it in terms of exigence, audience, and constraints--according
to Bitzer, the essential components of rhetorical situation.
This exercise not only gave students a better
sense of the range of public discourse "genres" available
to them, but also provided them with practice in manipulating
an actual rhetorical situation according to their motivations,
commitments, and beliefs. Students' fluency with these
concepts was vitally important to their success in the course: every
week, they were required to identify and briefly analyze
four rhetorical situations, as well as propose appropriate
interventions, based primarily on their reading of the newspaper
(this assignment was slightly modified midway through the
semester after a few students complained that it was "boring"). These "interventions," as
the assignment was called, were evaluated on the basis of
variety, thoroughness, emphasis on promoting specific actions
(as opposed to, say, expressing an opinion), and potential
efficacy. Although Bitzer points out that it's not
possible to respond to all rhetorical situations, the purpose
of this assignment was to heighten students' awareness of
the rhetorical situations around them and help them to generate
ideas for writing projects. And because I wanted students
to theorize rhetorical situations as well as intervene in
them, I requested that they attach to each project turned
in for a grade a detailed analysis of the rhetorical situation
to which it responded.
Despite heartening glimmers of comprehension like the one described above,
the intricacies of rhetorical situations confounded my students all semester. Most
quickly mastered the idea of exigence, but problems with audience and constraints
lingered. For example, while Bitzer states that "a rhetorical audience
consists only of those persons who are capable of being influenced by discourse
and being mediators of change" (8), many students insisted on addressing
their interventions to that mythical beast, the "general audience." Bitzer
also emphasizes that rhetoric "functions ultimately to produce action or
change in the world. . . . [It] is a mode of altering reality, not
by the direct application of energy to objects, but by the creation of discourse
which changes reality through the mediation of thought and action" (3-4). And
yet some students continued to make self-expression, not action, the primary
purpose of their interventions (e.g., letters of complaint), and others preferred
identifying situations that called for physical rather than discursive interventions--as
when Lisa read about a talent show to raise money for a local resident who
needed an organ transplant, and proposed to attend the event. Finally,
interventions generally lacked the variety and imagination displayed by the
Dalmatian dumping list: some weeks, three out of every four took the
form of letters whose purpose was either to complain or request information.
When I realized that students were having so much trouble constructing and
theorizing rhetorical situations, I reluctantly decided to create assignments
for them rather than ask them to devise their own. At first I was concerned
that this would compromise the authenticity of students' writing; however,
I eventually concluded that more structure would enable me to establish clearer
expectations as well as steer students toward more diverse and challenging
projects. After consulting with the class, then, I settled on four
assignments that I believed could accommodate a variety of personal, professional,
and civic exigencies; we began with letters (since most students already
felt confident with that form), then moved on to reports and proposals, biographical
sketches and speeches (to coincide with local elections), and press releases
and press kits. In an effort to encourage students to propose other
projects, every assignment sheet included this statement: "If you wish
to create a piece of writing other than [the one assigned here], please talk
to me so that we can establish expectations and criteria appropriate to your
rhetorical situation." No one took advantage of this opportunity, however. I
also explicitly encouraged students to "recycle" their research--i.e., use
it as the basis for different kinds of writing projects--in order to save
time and deepen their understandings of their topics, but few did, even when
deadlines accelerated toward the end of the semester.
Since these options were intended to help students
be more efficient about their work as well as more committed
to their projects, I was surprised that they didn't exploit
them more fully. What was even more surprising was
why they didn't do so: they saw it as cheating. Sharnique
wanted to use research from another class to propose the
creation of a student ombudsman position in the Minority
Affairs office; Selma wanted to write a profile of her roommate,
founder of an organic gardening club, for the newspaper's
weekly "Plant and Garden" page; Natassya wanted to revive
the newsletter for GROW, a local gay and lesbian advocacy
group; Kelli wanted to create an information packet about
sex education programs on behalf of her mother's PTA; Will
wanted to request that the English department offer a course
on Hemingway . . . the list goes on and on. I found
out about most of these ideas almost by accident, when students
casually mentioned them in class discussion, conversations
after class, or, occasionally, their homework. When
I urged them to follow up on these ideas for class, the astonished
reply was invariably "Can I really do that?" I asked
students if they understood that they could propose alternative
assignments to fulfill the requirements for the course, and
they assured me that they did. They apparently didn't
believe it, though, because if their projects involved recycling
previous research or working with people they already knew--in
other words, not starting from scratch--they usually rejected
them.
At first I attributed such incidents to students' inexperience in recognizing
opportunities for public writing and told myself that they would become more
adept at this as we moved through the semester. Many students were,
after all, voluntarily involved in extracurricular projects that required
writing (Julie, for example, was singlehandedly writing, editing, and distributing
a newletter for nontraditional students in an effort to rally enough support
to establish a nontraditional students organization), and it seemed only
a matter of time before they realized how these activities could satisfy
the requirements of the course. But this never really happened, and
it wasn't until late in the semester that I was able to see the reality of
the situation: students still saw WDP as the same old school writing,
defined most insidiously in terms of arbitrary rules apparently designed
to "catch" them in the act of doing the wrong thing. Or perhaps they
were so thoroughly unfamiliar with the ways of public discourse that they
were looking to their school writing experiences--however restrictive or
inappropriate--for guidance on how to complete course assignments "correctly." Whatever
its exact source, this insecurity extended to the role they assigned me;
on due dates, for example, when I asked if anyone was planning to use their
writing for an actual purpose, someone inevitably replied, "It depends on
what you think of it." Students were desperate for discernible classroom
landmarks, but I simply wanted to assume the mantel of "citizen intellectual." In
retrospect, this seems a little disingenuous on my part.
Thus I have to consider the ways in which I might have been complicit in
students' apparent inability to see the aims of the course as compatible
with the aims of their lives. The issue of recycling research seems
significant here, too, for even if students chose to do this, I required
them to produce a minimum number of pages of new, original writing for each
assignment--a policy I established only after Renée handed in identical
pieces of writing for two different assignments, reasoning that she'd found
a "real" situation the second time. Renée's behavior did, in
fact, strike me as "cheating"--or at least violating the spirit of the class. But
the same could be said of my new policy: however justified, it seemed
mostly to confirm students' suspicions that recycling research opened them
up to ambiguous charges of academic dishonesty (it wasn't exactly plagiarism,
after all), prompting them to ask questions like "Does a chart count as a
page of writing?" or "How different does it have to be in order to count
as original?" As a result of this policy, my subsequent efforts to
be flexible and responsive to students' endeavors were viewed with similar
mistrust. Sometimes, for example, I allowed students to supplement
their own writing with materials from other sources (e.g., FAQ sheets from
the Internet) as long as they cited them appropriately; this led some to
ask, "How will you know if we wrote it ourselves or if we got it off the
Internet?" And since I decided early on that I could neither assess
students' commitment to an issue nor enjoin them to submit their writing
for actual public purposes, they repeatedly asked, "Will you give us extra
credit if we actually use this?"
At first I tried to offer serious, thoughtful responses to questions like
these, and later I urged students to search their own consciences for answers,
but eventually I lost patience. So when Kathryn asked me during the
waning days of the semester if her press kit could respond to a fake rhetorical
situation, I replied, "I can't force you to do something authentic, but I
personally am too busy to pretend to create public discourse. What's
worth your time?" Embedded in this exchange is perhaps the most frustrating
element of WDP: the students who did embrace its ideals were among
the weakest writers in the class, and I couldn't find a way to make their
admirable public commitments "count" towards their grades.
Some of these problems were probably unavoidable: ultimately, I couldn't
not be the teacher in this class, and students couldn't not be students;
I couldn't disentangle myself from my own responsibility to establish policies
and assign grades, and therefore students couldn't convince themselves that "authenticity" was
a higher value than "originality," or that "cheating" should be a moot point
in this kind of class. As Mary Rose O'Reilley observes in The Peaceable
Classroom,
One of the teacher's hardest jobs is to
break conditioning. You can't just open the cages,
as do some of my friends in the animal liberation movement,
and hope the poor beasts will run free. They will
cower on their familiar newspaper, by their dish of Kibbles
and Bits. Set free in the wide world they will desperately
try to run mazes. (69)
This is as true for us as it is for our students,
which is why some of the problems I've described might have
been prevented had I simply built a better maze--that is,
had I firmed up the rather inchoate, amorphous purposes of
the course. I had struggled to contextualize WDP in
so many different ways--as "civically enhanced" professional
writing, as rhetorical theory, as consciousness raising--that
I couldn't establish the clarity and coherence that my students
needed in order to take risks. I didn't anticipate
the ways in which the multiple meanings and possibilities
for "writing for diverse publics" would confuse my goal of
demonstrating that writing could serve motivations beyond
achieving grades, interpreting literature, or expressing
opinions in a vacuum. I wasn't prepared for the ways
in which the various constructions of "public discourse" would
contradict each other (for one thing, public discourse isn't
necessarily civic discourse, and vice versa). And as
I was teaching the course, I couldn't see the ways in which
I was undermining my own goals by, for example, requiring
that students write academic analyses of the same rhetorical
situations they were trying to intervene in. I've considered
a number of ways I might respond to these problems if I ever
teach the course again--minimize references to activism,
require students to submit their assignments to the appropriate
audience, omit the theoretical synthesis essay and all but
a few of the theoretical readings--but none of these changes
is completely satisfactory for reasons that highlight the
unavoidable quandary of classes like this. The first
two locate the writing even more emphatically within teacher-defined
school norms, while the last one undermines its legitimacy
as an advanced academic course.
Despite the conflicting motivations and identities that characterize the
uncomfortable fit of public writing in the academy, I believe courses like
this are worth doing; for among other things, WDP succeeded in convincing
a number of students that public discourse can be usefully integrated into--can
indeed enrich--the lives they already lead. Even the admittedly "inorganic" assignment
schedule I imposed on the semester seemed to help students to recognize that
they could write dozens of letters, that there were interesting people and
important issues all around them, that they could determine how, or if, their
writing would matter. And while most student writing projects didn't
make it to their target publics, many of them did: Lisa used her speech
to ask for a raise at work (she got it); on behalf of the University's Spanish
Club, Amy wrote a proposal to a regional cable company requesting that they
add a Spanish-language channel (they declined); Kelli wrote a report on employee
theft at her workplace and forwarded it to the company's main office (following
her recommendation, they installed surveillance cameras); Julie secured a
job writing press releases in the Office of University Advancement; Ashley
helped her fiancé, an elementary school gym teacher, seek funding
to buy equipment that his physically handicapped students could use (the
verdict is still out on that one). This list, too, goes on and on. And
if some of these public discursive interventions were a little clumsy or
a little "raw," well, at least they were out there doing something--which
is more than I can say for all those literary analysis papers in the recycling
bin.
WORKS CITED
Adler-Kassner, Linda, Robert Crooks, and Ann Watters. "Service-Learning
and Composition at the Crossroads." Writing the Community: Concepts
and Models for Service-Learning in Composition. Ed. Linda
Adler-Kassner, Robert Crooks, and Ann Watters. Washington, DC: AAHE
and NCTE, 1997. 1-17.
Bitzer, Lloyd F. "The Rhetorical Situation." Philosophy
and Rhetoric 1 (1968): 1-14.
Cushman, Ellen. "The Rhetorician as an Agent of Social Change." College
Composition and Communication 47.1 (1996): 7-28.
"Election Results '97." Wilmington
Morning Star 5 Nov. 1997: 2B.
Ervin, Elizabeth. "Encouraging Civic
Participation among First-Year Writing Students; or, Why
Composition Class Should Be More Like a Bowling Team." Rhetoric
Review 15.2 (1997): 382-99.
Fairweather, James S. Faculty Work
and Public Trust: Restoring the Value of Teaching
and Public Service in American Academic Life. Boston: Allyn
and Bacon, 1996.
Flower, Linda. "Partners in Inquiry: A
Logic for Community Outreach." Writing the Community: Concepts
and Models for Service-Learning in Composition. Ed.
Linda Adler-Kassner, Robert Crooks, and Ann Watters. Washington,
DCL: AAHE and NCTE, 1997. 95-117.
Gans, Curtis. ". . . But That Won't Help
if Americans Ignore Public Affairs." Sunday Star-News [Wilmington,
NC] 9 Nov. 1997: 5E.
Herzberg, Bruce. "Community Service and
Critical Teaching." College Composition and Communication 45.3
(1994): 307-19.
O'Reilley, Mary Rose. The Peaceable
Classroom. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton/Cook,
1993.
Peck, Wayne Campbell, Linda Flower, and Lorraine Higgins. "Community
Literacy." College Composition and Communication 46.2 (1995): 199-222.
Schiappa, Edward. "Intellectuals and
the Place of Cultural Critique." Rhetoric, Cultural
Studies, and Literacy: Selected Papers from the 1994
Conference of the Rhetoric Society of America. Ed.
John Frederick Reynolds. Hillsdale: Erlbaum,
1995. 21-27.
Schutz, Aaron, and Anne Ruggles Gere. "Service
Learning and English Studies: Rethinking 'Public' Service." College
English 60.2 (1998): 129-49.
Shaw, Melissa. "Pittard Wins Top Seat
by 21 Vote Margin in Runoff." [UNCW] Seahawk 23
Apr. 1997: 1A+.
Sosnoski, James J., and David B. Downing. "A
Multivalent Pedagogy for a Multicultural Time." PRE/TEXT 14.3-4
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Watters, Ann, and Marjorie Ford. A
Guide for Change: Resources for Implementing Community
Service Writing. New York: McGraw, 1995.
---, eds. Writing for Change: A
Community Reader. New York: McGraw, 1995.
Wells, Susan. "Rogue Cops and Health
Care: What Do We Want from Public Writing?" College
Composition and Communication 47.3 (1996): 325-41.
Syllabus
Writing for Diverse Publics
Course Overview
This course takes as its central premise that "publics" are not stable, monolithic
places, but rather complex discursive practices that must negotiate multiple
and often conflicting rhetorical demands. It is designed to prepare
students to intervene in public discourses both as citizens and as professionals. With
the goals of discovering, conceptualizing, and engaging in opportunities
to write for diverse publics, readings will include the local newspaper,
theoretical essays on rhetoric and public discourse, and models of the kinds
of writing we will be working on.
Required Texts
Brereton, John C, and Margaret A. Mansfield. Writing on the Job. New
York: Norton, 1997.
semester subscription to Wilmington Morning Star
readings packet:
Bitzer, Lloyd F. "The Rhetorical
Situation." Philosophy and Rhetoric 1 (1968):
1-14.
Carpignano, Paolo, et al. "Chatter
in the Age of Electronic Reproduction: Talk Television
and the 'Public Mind.'" The Phantom Public Sphere. Ed.
Bruce Robbins. Minneapolis: U of Minnesota
P, 1993. 93-120.
Fisher, Walter R. "Narration as a Human Communication Paradigm: The
Case of Public Moral Argument." Communication Monographs 51
(1984): 1-22.
---. "Judging the Quality of Audiences
and Narrative Rationality." Practical Reasoning
in Human Affairs. Eds. J. L. Golden and J.
J. Pilotta. Dordrecht: Reidel, 1986. 85-103.
Fraser, Nancy. "Rethinking the Public
Sphere: A Contribution to the Critique of Actually
Existing Democracy. The Phantom Public Sphere. Ed.
Bruce Robbins. Minneapolis: U of Minnesota
P, 1993. 1-32.
Warner, Michael. "The Mass Public
and the Mass Subject." The Phantom Public Sphere. Ed.
Bruce Robbins. Minneapolis: U of Minnesota
P, 1993. 234-56.
Weiler, Michael, and W. Barnett Pierce. "Ceremonial
Discourse: The Rhetorical Ecology of the Reagan
Administration." Reagan and Public Discourse
in America. Eds. Michael Weiler and W. Barnett
Pearce. Tuscaloosa: U of Alabama P, 1992. 11-42.
Wells, Susan. "Rogue Cops and Health
Care: What Do We Want from Public Writing?" College
Composition and Communication 47.3 (October 1996): 325-41.
Course Requirements
Daily Work: Most class sessions will involve
writing and discussion related to regular and careful
reading of the course texts. Students will submit
weekly descriptions of potential "public discursive interventions," which
will provide practice in locating and analyzing opportunities
for public discourse and serve as the basis for more
fully developed writing assignments. Other daily
work might include response journals, informal oral presentations,
and collaborative work.
Public Writing: We will have
four public writing assignments for this class, two of
which will be completed for minimum credit (5%), and two
of which will be completed for maximum credit (20%). These
assignments may include grant proposals, biographical sketches,
speeches, and press releases; although specific grading
criteria (e.g., length requirements) will vary for each
assignment, expectations for maximum-credit options will
be proportionately higher than those for minimum-credit
options. Class participants will choose how they
wish to approach and weigh assignments based on their schedules,
interests, and local opportunities, and may propose alternative
projects (including collaborations) if assignments do not
accommodate personal interests or commitments; deadlines,
likewise, may be negotiated if they respond to actual circumstances. Each
assignment must be accompanied by a 1-2-page analysis of
the rhetorical situation to which your writing responds.
Theoretical Synthesis Essay: Throughout
the semester, we will be reading theoretical essays whose
purpose is to enhance the sophistication with which we
conceptualize public spheres, audiences, and discourses. The
final assignment will require class participants to write
a 10-15-page paper synthesizing key concepts in these essays;
illustrating and/or problematizing these concepts with
examples from their own public discourse efforts; and generating
conclusions about writing for diverse publics.
Oral Competency: In order to
satisfy a departmental and university requirement for senior
seminars, class participants, individually or in groups,
will be expected to do one of the following: give
a formal oral presentation, lead an organized class discussion,
or develop an oral component within a public writing assignment.
Contributions to Class Learning: A
classroom is itself a public, and its members have rights
and responsibilities. We all have the right to express
our opinions to an attentive audience, to choose writing
topics and genres consistent with our interests and goals,
and to expect all "citizens" of our class to be wholeheartedly
engaged in learning. Responsibilities include, but
are not limited to, doing all required reading, writing,
and research; coming to class ready to participate in all
activities; voluntarily contributing to discussions and
other activities; being tolerant of alternative viewpoints;
formulating well-thought-out opinions; and insisting that
all class participants take seriously their obligations
as a member of this learning community. These rights
and responsibilities extend to work with peers. Fulfilling
your responsibilities will affect your grade positively;
failing to do so will have the opposite effect.
Daily Work (including weekly interventions)
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15%
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Public Writing
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2 x 5% = 10%
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2 x 20% = 40%
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Theoretical Synthesis Essay
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20%
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Contributions to Class Learning
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15%
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* More extensive instructions and grading
criteria will be discussed in detail as each project is
assigned.
Calendar
It is imperative that everyone come to class prepared to discuss the newspaper
and other assigned readings. As we carry on conversations about these
texts as a class, you should also challenge yourself to carry on your own
dialogue with the writer/text as you read: ask questions in the margins;
make connections to your own experiences and goals for the course; mark
passages that strike you as interesting and begin to speculate about them;
educate yourself about local opportunities to engage in meaningful public
discourse.
Week 1
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Introduction to class and informal discussion
of examples of public discourse. Sign up for newspaper
subscriptions.
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Week 2
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Discuss Wells (in packet). Generate list
of personal commitments that might guide reading/writing
for class.
Discuss Bitzer (in packet) and, as a class, compose
sample analyses of rhetorical situation (exigence,
audience, constraints).
Homework: Read the local newspaper thoroughly. Identify
one possible public discursive intervention and write a 2-page analysis
of the rhetorical situation for that intervention.
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Week 3
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Discuss intervention ideas and analyses. Introduce
first public writing assignment: letters
(5%).
Homework: Describe 4 possible interventions (identification
of proposed genre; brief analysis of exigence, audience, and constraints). Of
these, at least 3 should inspired by the newspaper and at least 1
should be a letter that might fulfill the expectations for the first
assignment.
*As we move through the semester, develop a strategy for reading
the newspaper and keep your eyes and ears open for public discourse
opportunities that emerge elsewhere (e.g., classes, other media,
meetings of groups or agencies to which you feel committed). Challenge
yourself to come up with new intervention ideas, and get in the habit
of bringing newspapers to class with you.
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Week 4
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Four interventions due. Discuss WOJ Ch.
1, "Letters and Memos." Discuss interventions
and how they might apply to assignment.
Discuss WOJ "Introduction." In small
groups, discuss progress and review drafts of analyses
of rhetorical situation.
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Week 5
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Four interventions due. Student-led discussion
of interventions and newspaper highlights.
Peer review of analyses and letters.
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Week 6
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LETTERS AND ANALYSES DUE
Student-led discussion of interventions and newspaper highlights.
Discuss Fisher, "Narration" (in packet). Analyze
newspapers through narrative/rational world
paradigms.
Homework: Revisit the list of interests and commitments you
generated earlier in the semester, and update it if necessary. Have
specific ideas in mind for the grant workshop.
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Week 7
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Four interventions due. Workshop: finding
grant opportunities in the library, on the Internet,
and at campus and community offices. Guest
speaker: Donna Gunter, bibliographic instruction
librarian. Meet in library classroom.
Homework: By Week 9, locate a suitable grant opportunity, obtain
necessary forms and materials, and begin conceptualizing grant as
a rhetorical situation. If writing a report, do any necessary
research.
Discuss Fisher, "Judging" (in packet) and apply
to sample texts.
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Week 8
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Four interventions due. Discuss WOJ Ch.
6, "Reports and Proposals," including grant
opportunities as rhetorical situations and differences
between reports and proposals. Introduce
second public writing assignment: report (5%)
or proposal (20%).
Optional conferences in my office or time to work
in library or computer lab.
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Week 9
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Four interventions due. In small groups,
discuss progress and review drafts of analyses
of rhetorical situation.
Peer review of analyses and reports/proposals.
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Week 10
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REPORTS/PROPOSALS (including all forms and materials
required by funding agency) AND
ANALYSES DUE
Discuss alternatives to interventions. Student-led discussion
of newspaper highlights.
Workshop: speech writing. Guest speaker: Nancy
Jones, former speech writer at Environmental Protection
Agency.
Homework: Write a 2-page characterization of the "rhetorical
ecology" of the Wilmington Morning Star, using relevant concepts
and terminology from Weiler and Pearce and illustrative examples
from the newspaper.
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Week 11
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Discuss Weiler and Pearce (in packet) and homework.
Homework: Bring to class several examples of biographical sketches
from the newspaper.
Discuss WOJ 57-62 and sample sketches. Introduce
third public writing assignment: biographical
sketch (5%) or speech (20%).
Homework: Complete an appropriate number of interventions according
to our new options for the remainder of the semester: 4 interventions
as we've been doing them thus far; 2 analyses of the efficacy of
articles in the newspaper; or 2 traditional interventions and 1 analysis
of efficacy. I will continue to use the word "intervention" as
shorthand for these options. Please note that since I am considering
2 analyses roughly equivalent to 4 traditional interventions, your
effort should be roughly equivalent as well.
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Week 12
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Interventions due. Discuss Warner (in packet).
In small groups, discuss progress and review drafts
of analyses of rhetorical situation.
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Week 13
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Interventions due. Peer review of
analyses and sketches/speeches.
PROFILES/SPEECHES (including audiotapes) AND ANALYSES
DUE
Introduce fourth public writing assignment: press release (5%)
or press kit (20%).
Homework: Read WOJ Ch. 4, "Press Releases and Press
Kits."
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Week 14
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Interventions due. Workshop: Press
releases and press kits. Guest speaker: Mimi
Cunningham, UNCW Assistant Vice Chancellor for University
Relations.
In small groups, discuss progress and review drafts
of analyses of rhetorical situation.
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Week 15
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Optional conferences in my office or time to conduct
research.
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Week 16
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Peer review of analyses and press releases/press
kits.
PRESS RELEASES/PRESS KITS AND ANALYSES DUE
Mock press conferences. Review expectations for theoretical
synthesis essay and begin generating concepts as a class.
Homework: Watch at least one episode of network news and at
least one of the following: talk show (e.g., Oprah), newsmagazine
(e.g., Dateline), or "tabloid news" show (e.g., Hard Copy). Take
notes.
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Week 17
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Discuss Carpignano et al. (in packet) and apply
to television texts.
LAST DAY OF CLASS
In small groups, continue to discuss theoretical readings and/or
review drafts of synthesis essays.
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Week 18
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SYNTHESIS ESSAYS DUE TO MY OFFICE
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